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At Erudite

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When Tris meets up with her brother Caleb.
I loved this part; I love Caleb.

Unfortunately I don't like how I drew Tris here. She looks like she's verbally throwing something in his face, an "I'm better than you" type of thing, and that's not how Tris is at all. I tried to make it look like concern, because bad things are coming out of Erudite and Caleb knows about them.

Oh well. I have the rest of my life to perfect the display of emotions in my drawings.

Divergent (c) Veronica Roth
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Fangirlinthecloset's avatar
You did a great job! Her posture looks just fine, I read it more as her being concerned too. And Caleb looks perfect, no one ever makes fanart of him! :) My Dauntless friends all think I'm crazy for liking/understanding the Erudite, but still, they are kind of awesome and I refuse to throw myself off of tall buildings.